Feedback For Presentation

 From the Teachers: I was told that I presented well. I discussed my chosen genre well with a brief audience profile. This could be more detailed generally. As discussed elements of the pitch were missing which I need to complete. Masthead design, house styles. The general design elements of my magazine. Finally, I discussed colour, and content appropriately.

Class Feedback:  I didn't receive any class feedback , but personally i could have explained my magazine in more detail and have a couple magazines to compare them to mine. I also could have gathered more information about other magazines which have been published and gathered more examples of magazine covers which have influenced mine.